Showing posts with label vertical poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label vertical poetry. Show all posts

Friday, January 14, 2011

Eventide

night
please linger
such a beckon
stay with me
don't end
join my peaceful stroll
through
pages
ideas
responses

unhitch your wagon
from the moving train


float in clouds
of rest


turn off the
bells
alarms
calendar checks

cradled by stillness


oh


don't shut your eyes
make this
last
and
last
and
last




Do you ever cling to the evening, staying up WAY too late, knowing you'll be rummy in the morning - - - -just because you love owning the night?

Saturday, January 1, 2011

Vertical Poetry




I have a thing for words .


I love to read, of course. And because I love to have things written down, (and my journal is better than my memory) that requires me to write. So I do.


It used to be excruciating---a dreaded task--- to get myself to write regularly....less so now, after making myself do it for some time now. (That's another post.)


For the last few months I've been doing a little experiment. I call it "vertical poetry." Basically, it's word chunks that I list . . . . . . uh huh. . . . vertically.


My usual writing tends to be pretty wordy. The vertical poetry challenges me - - - -to put down the essence of something in less words than is natural for me.





be still

journal in hand

ponder the day past

notice what emerges inside me

grasp the essence

write phrases





Yea . . . . something like that.



My inspiration is a blog I enjoy. Actually I'm a lurker on her blog (Lodestar). Christie somebody. A grandmother aged woman. She uses that short phrase style a lot. And she uses lots of rich colored crisp photos. Her brevity and the love she pours out for her family draws me to her, and the fact that a grandmother has something to say, among all the young mommy blogs. (I'm consideringing breaking my silence and letting her know she has influenced me.)





Last August, I decided to experiment with that style for a few minutes each time I sit down to write. I kind of like it, as constrast (but certainly not replacing) my other l-o-n-g-e-r writing.





Some of that will be showing up as I go along here. It would be interesting to me to hear a reader's response----if the essence is there for a reader. We'll see.


What writing changes have you noticed for yourself?